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The pain is unforgiving,
And I give into the pressure of life,
The first slices are relieving,
Im addicted to the knife.

Somehow It's the only way I can live,
Yet every slice makes me die inside,
The numbness is overwhelming,
I welcome it every time.

Into to the pit I fall,
How can I be so blind,
The blood keeps on dripping down my arm,
It's the answer I've failed to find.

Each drop of blood,
Is another unanswered prayer I will take to the grave,
Buried and I will be silent forever,
To the knife, Im just another slave.
©2003-2009 ~sweetlildevil
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Author's Comments

I wrote this yesterday, didn't want to submit it though. I realized the most precious gift I have.. is my BF. The one that keeps me from hurting my self..

Ne way, if yall dont like the poem.. im sorry.. I can't please everyone.

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:iconbleedingpairs:
I like the last line. Some more poetic imagery throughout the rest of the piece would be nice, though.
:iconsweetlildevil:
I don't try to create stuff I haven't went through, except this one really erotic poem I made a long time ago.. I make poems from MY point of view and MY emotions.. not for other people. But thank you anyway. I can't really help what people say or what they think bout muh poemz :P

-Jennifer

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Boyfriends come and go, love stays with you till the bitter end.
:iconpeachy-punkgirl:
wow. this is SOOO good
why wouldnt you want to submit someting so awesome as this?! favs!

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trying to fit in, born to stand out!
:iconsacredshadowdweller:
Gurlie... this is amazing! it flows wonderful and there IS imagery THROUGHOUT the ENTIRE poem!! :clap: this is awesome! its a :+fav:

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:blackrose:Trapped in the depths of my shallow mind...:blackrose: To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.:blackrose: He has my heart in the palms of of his hands...:blackrose:

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:butterflytwo:~*Nikita*~
Bestest man in the whole world!!
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:iconlelekelley:
This is very powerful and reminds me of a darker time in my life.

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=lelekelley :smooch: :heart: :glomp: ~Velerin
:iconcalintz-zokaun:
Awesome poem, it really is.
:iconrock-chick-riot:
I love the line "I'm addicted to the knife". I've been in a pretty bad way myself in the past, and though I never used a knife, I came very very close to using other methods :S. I love how you used the word addicted because that's exactly what it does feel like. You've kept it real, and I like that. The only problem in all this, is that I'd hate to think you're seriously addicted to the depression and suffering yourself. Please tell me you're not, for your sake more than mine.
:iconblackdaze:
wow thats awsome ... great job!

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Lost! I'm trying to find my way out of these twisted thoughts!
:iconicklefluffywolfy:
A swirling and well crafted piece here... you capture the nature of self-harm very truthfully and with great colour here. :hug: :hug: :hug:

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