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I don't know why,
The lonelyness pulls me in,
Answers I've caught,
Starts to slip through my fingers again.

It slowly consums me,
(Taking it's time)
I've tried to run away,
(But it knows where I hide)
Release all this hatred inside,
But you'll be surprised how quickly you can fall
(When you have nothing, nothing at all.)

I try to smile,
This fake emotion that fools no-one but my self,
I most likely need help,
'Cuz everyone thinks I'm crazy,
Yet when I look at you,
I realize I'm the only sane person around.

It slowly consums me,
(Taking it's time)
I've tried to run away,
(But it knows where I hide)
Release all this hatred inside,
But you'll be surprised how quickly you can fall,
(When you have nothing...nothing at all.)
©2004-2009 ~sweetlildevil
:iconsweetlildevil:

Author's Comments

I was listening to LP, I've been wanting to write a poem for awhile so I tried to let my imagination run free..eh, I'll work with it a lil more if people like it.

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:iconcalintz-zokaun:
O.O wow...I love this. This sounds something that LP would sing about lol. But this is awesome. Instant fav. But really this is a great poem.
:iconbellanouva:
I like this very much, its like some sort of truth is eating away at you and that feelings makes you act differently or see differently all the people you surrounded by...I like this very much Jen, please keep writing, it shows so many sides of human nature;)

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Bellanouva

"To see a world in a grain of sand and heaven in a wildflower, to hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour"
W. Blake
:icontalkaza:
very good. i can relate to it's meaning.

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To see through my eye's, Would be to know the way I am
:iconmelonman11:
this is an incredible peice :D, i understand the feeling behind it... alot!
also fits coz i bin listening 2 LP alot l8ly.

neway, gtg
l8z

Melon
:icondamarikomu:
Looking good. These are like lyrics indeed and I can imagine someone singing this.
:heart:
:iconblackdaze:
very very good .... u are an awsome writer.

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Lost! I'm trying to find my way out of these twisted thoughts!
:iconpeachy-punkgirl:
totally sounds like a song. i love it...VERY well done! fav ing it:D

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trying to fit in, born to stand out!
:iconphobiald:
this is awsome i like how it fallows a lyrical structure. great work sounds like the kind of song my band would play lol.

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"as he gazes into the dark blindly then he learns to see in the dark"
My world is a better place with you Brook

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