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Im lonely,
Im dieing,
Im without a soul,
Inside im screaming and crying.

No purpose, no reason,
Kill me for an act of treason,
Don't yell , Im deaf,
I can't hear your words,
I still see the violence,
Still feel the hurt.

Im another one of them freaks,
Roaming with out a cause,
excited by death,
saddend by life,
I laugh when life took an unexpected pause,
No one can see, they are as blind as me,
Kiss me, my sweet victory,
Drown me in my own tears.

Im lonely,
Im dieing,
Im with out a soul,
Inside im screaming and crying.
©2003-2009 ~sweetlildevil
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Just one of my poems I found when I was digging through some of my files. I don't expect people to like it though lol.

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:iconwirestyle:
wow this is great, i love it ^_^

very sweet piece..

+fav

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aeiko.
:iconelsa:
Beautiful peice. :o I love it.

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<3.
:iconbreezybriefs:
I like it..every time I read it it gets better ^_^ ...Very nice poem!

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the key to heaven....was hung on a nail
:iconkiwi070620:
Wow, deep I love it. This is very realistic. Leaves me speechless. :)

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Kiwi
:iconblackdaze:
wow this is so sad and so full of emotions .... its really good! its a fav!
:icondarkbradis:
That is a nice piece. I can relate to it, and can see and feel the pain. Good stuff.

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Look into a mirror, are YOU really looking back?
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I definitely feel the pain. I have felt alot of pain in my life too. Some worse than others. :+favlove: I feel fro you girl. :hug:s
:iconliri:
:hug: I feel for you. Nice outlet, is poetry.
Im another one of them freaks,
Roaming with out a cause
didn't like that line, and there are many spelling errors, which could be fixed with a quick wander to the spellcheck button.

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Never stay up on the barren heights of cleverness, but come down to the green valleys of silliness
-Wittgenstein
:iconasapphiremist:
Very emotional, I don't know why you would think we wouldn't like it. Its a lovely piece. Well done
:icondunkler-adlig:
This is a very great piece, you are crazy to think it wouldn't be liked. Aside from the few minor spelling errors it is perfect.

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I AM DOUG, AND DOUG MEANS ME!
I protect Peace and Justice in the DA galaxy.
:hug: :D Hug Doug!!
I am the STAR WARS SMURF!
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